Add more TODOs from Leo's review

paper/paper.tex

@@ -39,9 +39,7 @@
 \begin{document}
 
 % TODO
-% Define all acronyms
-%  * PCB
-% Use less acronyms
+% Put picture on page 1
 % Term "twisted"? "interleaved spirals"?
 % Early pic / vis of spirals, somewhere in intro
 % Put explanation of WPT to front of related work 
@@ -77,6 +75,7 @@ fanSimultaneousWirelessPower2024, leeSimpleWirelessPower2017, liWirelessPowerTra
 maierContributionSystemDesign2019, mooreApplicationsWirelessPower2019, mouEnergyEfficientAdaptiveDesign2017,
 mouWirelessPowerTransfer2015, mullenEffectMisalignmentInductive, rezmeritaSelfMutualInductance2017,
 zhangWirelessPowerTransfer2019}.
+% FIXME todo too many refs, weed out ones that don't appear elsewhere.
 While working on an application of Inductive WPT in a Inertial Hardware Security Module (IHSM) as previously
 published by \textcite{gotteCantTouchThis2022}, we found ourselves presented with an unusual set of constraints
 attempting WPT through a rotating joint using a planar inductor implemented in a Printed Circuit Board (PCB)---a set of
@@ -139,6 +138,7 @@ in distributed capacitance coincides with the intuition that led to the creation
 in early radio sets more than a hundred years ago, before the invention of ferrites.
 
 \subsection{Contributions}
+% TODO itemize this.
 In this paper, we introduce twisted inductors, a novel technique of laying out planar inductors that both improves
 rotational symmetry in rotating wireless power transfer interface as well as quality factor in other applications. We
 provide detailed layout instructions, including a mathematical analysis of the available parameter space and an
@@ -292,6 +292,7 @@ which has been used to stack planar coils for more than a century\cite{flemingPr
 % differentially cleaner. We should adopt this observation for our inductors, which likewise are electrically symmetric
 % when compared to a single-layer spiral inductor.
 
+% TODO abbrev WPT, move earlier
 \subsection{Inductive Wireless Power Transfer in Practice}
 
 Inductive WPT has been proposed in a large number of
@@ -541,6 +542,7 @@ Our inductor design tool is available in this paper's supplementary material as
 the end of this paper.
 
 \section{FEM Simulation}
+% TODO figure out where to abbreviate FEM, spell out once, compare with other TPEL papers.
 
 To validate our analytical approximations, we performed a series of FEM simulations in Elmer FEM. For a number of
 inductor layouts, we performed simulations to determine ohmic resistance and inductance. Due to limitations in our