ma: soften the burny paragraph

ma/safety_reset.tex

@@ -463,14 +463,13 @@ ubiquitous promises of energy savings depends on consumer coöperation. Here, th
 question smart metering's chances of long-term success.
 
 As \cite{pierce01} pointed out smart metering developments could benefit greatly from early involvement of HCI research.
-HCI research certainly would not have overlooked entire central issues such as privacy as it happened in the dutch
+A systematic analysis of non-technical aspects can prevent issues such as privacy implications initially being
-case\cite{cuijpers01}. The current corporate-driven approach to a technological advance forced through national
+overlooked in the dutch deployment\cite{cuijpers01}. It is not clear that current standardization practice encompasses
-standardization bears a risk of failing to meet its ostensible objectives for consumers. The role of consumers and the
+an in-depth consideration of the role of consumers in the socio-technological environment posed by this new technology.
-complex socio-technological environment posed by this new technology is not seriously considered in the standardization
+Standardization is often narrowly focused on technological aspects with little input beyond the occassional public
-process. While certainly no one will admit to outright ignoring consumers in smart meter standardization, their role is
+consultation at the time the new standards are being implemented into law. This corporate-driven approach to
-largely limited to the occasional public consultation. At the same time the standards are written by technologists--it
+technological progress being forced through national standardization bears a risk of failing to meet its advertised
-seems largely without input on their practicality or socio-technological implications from fields such as HCI.
+consumer benefits.
-% TODO citation? too much burn?
 
 \subsection{Common components}
 \label{sm-cpu}